tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1245172560982660024.post8668854509108358561..comments2023-03-29T22:10:53.869+13:00Comments on Rimu Learning Hub: Easter Writing Competition Winner!Mr Moriartyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14362859834913417326noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1245172560982660024.post-13371115395803050772015-05-01T10:46:15.294+12:002015-05-01T10:46:15.294+12:00OMG i love your ester egg OMG i love your ester egg Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1245172560982660024.post-31022553744925624852015-05-01T10:44:00.942+12:002015-05-01T10:44:00.942+12:00Awesome Connor IT A Awesome Egg but do you know t...Awesome Connor IT A Awesome Egg but do you know the name for it or is it call the best Easter EggAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1245172560982660024.post-69403531503153908742015-04-22T20:41:54.334+12:002015-04-22T20:41:54.334+12:00Hi Connor...I love this writing...all I kept think...Hi Connor...I love this writing...all I kept thinking was this would be something I could eat. The writing really got me going when you said the inside of the egg was green. You know my favourite colour is GREEN! (Go Kea...) At the end of your story I couldn't believe that your dazzling Easter Egg was a live creature. I didn't see that twist in your story coming. This is my favourite sentence: The brittle chocolate shell surrenders to my destructive teeth. <br />Keep up the awesome writing Connor and congratulations on your win!Mrs Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05109108085415105734noreply@blogger.com